Here's a version that ties the text together a bit, though there's an issue with the text shape where I cut the raven out. I can't be bothered fixing it.
This also adds some depth.
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I've attached a slightly corrected version of the previous one (not this post) and the "sliced" text logo in SVG format.
Edit: I just realized that Inkscape has an option to select the license. It defaults to "proprietary," so I switched it to the Creative Common's license mentioned on the previous page. I haven't uploaded corrected versions, though.